Monday, June 27, 2016

Book Review (Demon King by Kassandra Lynn) - Monday Madness

Hello my lovely Readers!
I hope you had a fantastic weekend. Today I have a review, this is the second book in a series. The review for the first book in this series can be found here. Seeing as it had been some time since I read the first one I decided to give it another read. It did not take my attention as it had before.


Demon King by Kassandra Lynn


 I went into reading the second book ready for either improvement or at the very least a consistency from the previous book. I did not find this to be true.

For me, this book was predictable. It seemed rushed and gave me figurative whiplash. One moment someone felt one way and the next turn it was a different way. It was challenging to remember who was mad at whom and why. However, I am still curious to find out what happened to Adrianna. As for the grammar and spelling, it could use some help. It has some good ideas, and is readable, it just needs to be polished.

I do plan on reading the third book, and I am hoping that it will be a little more put together and not rushed.

I give this book three and a half stars.


That is all. Keep Reading!

Ta, Ta!







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Monday, June 20, 2016

Book Review (Written on the Apple Tree by Ann Girdharry) - Monday Madness

Hello my lovely Readers!
I hope your weekend was fun and exciting! Mine was dull, but I got some writing done and I am feeling confident about the books I was working on.
Today's madness is another review.




This short (emphasis on short) story is about a woman named Kim and her encounter with a man named Oliver. He seems familiar, but she is not able to pinpoint why. It is part of a mystery and psychological suspense series.

It is basically two chapters long, and decently written. Because it is only 4,000 words, I expected it to be a little more polished and put together. this was not the case, it was riddled with mistakes. However, it was interesting and did keep me entertained, but not enough for me to feel the need to check out the rest of the series. I have not read the others books and therefore do not know how they compare to this one. Regardless, I would not pay $1.99 (this is the current price) to buy this book. I mean, come on, $2 for two chapters? That is ridiculous.


If you have a Kindle Unlimited subscription, I would suggest giving it a try. Otherwise, I do not think it is worth the money.

That is all for today. Keep Reading!

Ta, Ta.





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Monday, June 6, 2016

Book Review (Eden Bound by Kyrah Winters) - Monday Madness

Hello my lovely Readers!
Welcome to another Monday and another review! I hope you had a great weekend. I spent a ridiculous amount of time on the computer, but more on that later.

If you missed last week’s Friday Friend Day post go check it out now. I added a rating chart. Now, on to the review!





This book had beautiful vivid descriptions, but I think, at times, there were too many descriptions. From what I read, I did not see many mistakes. Overall, it is a well-written story. However, I was unable to get into it and only read the first two chapters.  Although, I do not think it was the entirely the authors fault I had trouble. I just have not been in the best headspace lately. Anyway, I am giving it three, because it really was so well written and I hate to give something that had good content a bad rating all because it did not suit me.



Here is my understanding of what the book is about.


It is a paranormal action filled fantasy with some romance mixed in. The archangel Alexander is sent to Earth to kill some demons. Along the way, he meets Karis, a human photographer. He pulls her into the enchanting supernatural world, which has always been hiding in plain sight. They must embark on this dangerous adventure together.

I will be trying this book later, because it is totally up my alley. Try it and let me know what you think.


*THIS BOOK IS A KINDLE UNLIMITED BOOK*



That is all for now! Keep Reading!


Ta, Ta.








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Monday, May 23, 2016

Book Review (Pride's Children: Purgatory by Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt)- Monday Madness

Hello my lovely Readers!

Welcome back, I hope you had a great weekend. Now prepare yourself for one of the reviews that I hate doing, but if you read my post, Reviews Rant then you know I feel I must. This book I give a one star too. This means I find it unreadable.


Pride's Children: Purgatory by Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt





All right everyone, I did not finish this book. I could not finish this book. It is 545 pages long, and it took the first page for me to realize why it was so long.

This author writes tediously long descriptions about everything. The very first 'paragraph' is one run-on sentence. I shoved on, it had to get better, right? It didn't. Sometimes I can get through drawn out descriptions, but she also had the need to prove that she had this immense vocabulary. Sometimes learning to write simple and to the point needs to happen.

I would like to clarify. I have no problem with using 'large' vocabulary, I actually think it is great. However, I do not think it needs to be used excessively. There comes a point where it is too much. In my opinion, this book hit that point and continued going. There is a beauty in simplicity and I think this author has not yet learned this.

I desperately tried  to get into a book that was given such high ratings, but I honestly could not.

As always, I think you should give it a try and give your own honest review.

That is all for now. Keep Reading!

Ta, Ta.



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Monday, May 16, 2016

Book Review (Wraith by Robert Allen Johnson)- Monday Madness

Hello my lovely readers, and welcome to another Monday Madness!

Today's review is on Wraith by Robert Allen Johnson 



In this thrilling tale, we follow two characters as they face many trials and pains. Trio is a boy, a hunter. He tracks down men from the Empire and takes their lives just as they had taken his father's life. The coin Trio receives from The Hand for these deaths is used to take care of his sister and mother.

Arch is a traveler of many places. As he and his horse make their way home they are met with a shadowy figure. This unwelcomed ghost refuses to leave Arch's side. The Darkness temps him with the possibility relieving the guilt from his past.

As you can guess from the synopsis this is a captivating story. The descriptions that Robert uses are woven together in a beautiful way. However, he gets a little bit carried away and at times over describes useless things. It is also unclear as to whom the chapters about until you get to character's name. So each chapter can either change to a different character or be the same person in the previous chapter. You have to read a paragraph or two in order to find out which person is being talked about. Then when you do figure it out you feel like you have to go back and reread because you don't remember what was said about that character. You didn't know who was being talked about and so the information didn't quite stick in your mind. At least, that is how it is for me.

Overall it is an exquisite novel and one I will be adding to my list of books I want to buy. I give it 4 out of 5 stars.

That is all for today. Keep Reading!

Ta, Ta


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Monday, May 2, 2016

Book Review (Infinity Formula by Steven V.S.)- Monday Madness

I have reviewed this book before, but I did not post it here. The author made some edits and asked if I would consider giving it another look. I did and here is what I think.

The Infinity Formula by Steven VS
The Infinity Formula by Steven VS

Although you can tell that a great amount of editing took place, I still feel it could use more work. This truly has so much potential. It could easily become one of my favorites. However, as I said there has been a great amount of editing, so I will be changing the previously given three stars to four.
Some of the chapters still need more structure and some of the ideas still do not quite fit together. I did notice that most of the useless descriptions were taken out and additional information was given for things that are more necessary.  
The specific example I gave below was not only fixed but had a few things added that gave it some oomph!

*Below is my original review. The edits Steven made helped make this book much more captivating and he does deserve the bump in the star level.  

This book is good and has the potential to be great. Here is the deal, the storyline is a solid idea it is the actual writing that I feel needs help. In addition, I think the placement of ideas needs work too. The individual chapters need a little more…structure? I think that is the word I am looking for.
Often things that were completely useless were described and then we were given little to no information on more important matters (I should add I do not mean it was held back for suspense, just flat out did not describe things.) The phrasing and ideas within the book often jumped from place to place. Almost as if the author had so many good ideas, he could not decide which to put in and so he added both. I also noticed that subject pronouns were used at inappropriate times making it difficult to understand exactly who he was talking about. For example, this is taken from the beginning of the book (it is from the second chapter, not a spoiler).
“The gunshot rang.
Lily…
He pushed her to the ground, covering her. He was shouting at him, but he couldn’t hear, the crowd had erupted into a frenzy…”
Someone, please tell me who was shouting at whom? Even if the author meant to say she instead of he that still shows the need for some more editing. Anyway, as you can tell from that little blurb it really is an action packed book. I honestly would like to see this book worked on more and republished as it really has so much to work with.
That is my honest opinion.



As always, keep reading.

Ta, ta

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Friday, April 22, 2016

What I learned publishing my first novel

When I started writing a book two years ago, it had not even occurred to me that I could publish it. Then I discovered the wonderful world of self-published books. I wanted to be one of those authors. My new goal was in place, I was going to write and then publish and become a great author. Well, I published and no one read my book.



I thought something must be wrong with the book. Maybe the story was not good enough. Maybe my writing was dull and lacked vivid descriptions. Or, worst of all, maybe I still had mistakes in my novel! Perish the thought that I could be imperfect!

It was all three and that I was very inexperienced. I was silly and thought that having a blog and putting a book on Amazon was suddenly going to get me readers. Looking back, I realize how absurd my thinking was. As I have been preparing to launch my second book, my thoughts have been directed towards these mistakes. You faithful readers now get to watch as I air my dirty laundry and tell you exactly where I messed up.



Topic One: Thinking I could do everything on my own

As great and cheap as this option is, it is so beyond false. I do not know about anyone else, but for me, I spend at least a year on one book. Seriously, I work on every book I publish for at least a year. I spend all this time on something and I want it to be good and at least somewhat appreciated. However, someone who knows what they are doing really should do a few things for you.

Editing: 
Now I do not mean that you cannot possibly edit your book, what I am saying is that someone needs to go over your work. Why don't we all take a trip back to third grade when we started writing paragraphs? Those were seriously scary. Anyway, you finally get your paragraph about your favorite dog finished.

Then the teacher says, "Take out your red pencils."

You spend the next little bit going over your work and fixing then you are done, right? Wrong, your teacher's next instruction is to pass your paper to a friend. Every time, that friend would find something else. Wait, but you went over it; you checked and checked. Why did your friend find something? They saw what you could not.

Now back to the present. We all develop blinders for our mistakes. Yes, there are things you can do to help, but the best is to have someone else go over it. Look, I get it you are a grammar fanatic and so you think you are fine. Guess what, you're not, because no one is perfect. Even if your grammar seems spot on, there are other mistakes that you may need an editor to tell you.

In the next few weeks, a review of a book will be coming up, and it is not a very good review. This particular author has decent grammar, what she was lacking was self-control. The first paragraph is one giant run-on sentence. Moreover, she over-described everything. Her tediously long book could have been so much better if she had cut out all her fillers. Now, I do not know if she hired an editor, but if she did not then she should have. If she did then she needs a new one or to listen to the editors advice.

You do not need to use an expensive one, but you should at least have someone go through it.

Front Cover: 
This is so important. Even though we are told not to judge a book by its cover, we all do. Thus far, I have made all my covers, but I do regret Recovering is an Art's cover. I used Creatspace's cover creator and I kid you not in the first week I was able to find six other covers like it. This is not technically a bad thing, so much as an annoying thing. You want your cover to stand out.

There are two other options:

1. Hire someone to make you a cover. Again, this does not need to be someone who charges a ton. Hunt around and do not be afraid to ask for prices and samples of the work they do.

2. Learn how to use Photoshop and create your own. If you read my blog, then you know this is what I did. I know that makes this technically not fit under this category, but I am putting it here anyway. 

However, this is not always a cheap option either. You still need to get a Photoshop program. The one I use is Adobe Photoshop CS6. Also, if you are not a photographer then you need to subscribe to a place that has stock photos that can be used for *commercial use. The legit free one I have found with decent photos is Pixabay
I suggest doing more of your own research in this if you would like to try this option. 

Topic Two: Get an Editor


I know I am repeating myself, but seriously just get one. There are several who do not cost very much. Click this link. It will take you to a Goodreads search for proofreaders/editors. Now email everyone you find and ask for a quote. If you are lucky, you will find someone who will do it for free. What will it hurt if someone does it for free? Nothing and no one. In fact, it could only make your writing better. Some of you are thinking, yeah I have heard all of this before and I do a great job at catching my mistakes. Good for you for being positive, but I doubt that you catch everything. Get off your high horse and just do it.
Okay, rant over.

Topic Three: Giveaways do not always get you readers


Now, I am not saying you should never do them, because they can be helpful. What I am saying is that you should not expect to get a hundred or even ten readers just because you did a giveaway. On Goodreads I went from one person having Recovering is an Art on their ‘to-read’ list to 265 people in the span of a month. This is excellent and I swear I am not trying to be negative. I am just being realistic.

As of right this second, I have four ratings for Recovering is an Art. One is someone who read my book a long time ago and one is someone who offered to review it (she did not get a free copy, but read it through Kindle Unlimited). I am not sure whom the other ratings are from.
Basically, 265 people added it and three people read it. Giveaways are great at getting your title out there, but not necessarily getting people to read it. Not only that, just because you give someone your book does not mean you get a review. It is possible that the two ratings are from someone who received my book. It may be more likely that they are from someone who used Kindle Unlimited to read it.

So if you do a giveaway (at least in my experience through Goodreads) it is not always likely that you will get readers.

Topic Four: Getting reviews is key
The more reviews you get the more people will see it. Let us say that someone named Jessica read your book and wrote a review. Now if she had twenty of her friends following her, and they see her review for a book they may click on it. Then Jessica’s friend Kelly reads your description and decides to read it. After she writes a review, two of Kelly’s friends see that she and Jessica both read and liked this book. So they decide to read it, and so on and so forth. See how great reviews can be.
Since I have been in my cave lately, I have slacked off in the getting reviews area. Now that I am back it is one of the things I will be working on.

Topic Five: A regular internet presence

This one is a difficult one to accomplish. We all have lives outside of the internet, but if you are not doing your own advertising than who is? As I just stated in the previous topic, because I have had a rough year so far, I have not been on top of my game. The potential reviews I could have gotten if I had been more actively involved online have most likely forgotten about my book now. You need to be consistent in your marketing when you are self-published.

Topic Six: Make Mistakes and Realize it Takes Time

It is good and okay to make mistakes. The key is learning from them. Everything in this blog post are things I learned because I messed up. Just do your best and see where it takes you. Realize that you are not going to be number one right away. It is going to take some time and a ton of effort. You may never get to the number one spot, but keep on fighting, because it is worth it. Writing gives you a voice. It is a way to speak out. So do it.

Topic Seven: Have fun

Equals 



Recently I have been in work mode. I hate when my brain does this because it crushes my creativity. This should be something you enjoy doing. Do not let the pressure get to you. Have fun. Love your work. Most of all, Keep Writing.

Rock on, my readers.


Ta, ta.



*I am not a professional in this topic this is just how I have interpreted information I have gathered from the internet.